Writing report
general IELTS Writing: Task 1
Overall score
6.00
6.0 of 9.0
Submitted on
Nov 12, 2024 (5 months ago)
Writing duration
0 minutes
Task description
You started in your present job two years ago. You now feel it is important for your career development to move to a different department in the same company. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter, say what you have learned in your present job, suggest how the company would benefit from moving you to a different department, explain why you do not wish to leave the company.
You should write a minimum of 150 words.
Source: Cambridge 19
Task answer
Dear Mr Lekan,
My Name is Joella Michael, I am a part of the health information managers team and I’ve been working in this department for the last thirty two months, 12 months of which I was the head of the department and now requesting a move to the quality assurance department.
In the course of my being in this department, I now understand the concept and importance of data collection, knowing the different procedures and the care taken to achieve healths of patients with different diagnosis and even people management
With everything I have learnt and understood from HIM I fully believe I can translate that into a broad prospect of preventing quality failures, delivery of care, and generally present a client based focused orientation
In as much as this qualities learnt here can take me far and wide, I do not want to leave the organisation as I believe I have taken too much not to give back, also my skills acquire will really help move the organisation forward
It would mean a lot if my request can be keenly looked in as I await a favourable response from you
Warm regards
Joella Michael
Word count:196