Writing report
general IELTS Writing: Task 1
Overall score
6.50
6.5 of 9.0
Submitted on
Jan 04, 2025 (3 months ago)
Writing duration
0 minutes
Task description
You started in your present job two years ago. You now feel it is important for your career development to move to a different department in the same company. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter, say what you have learned in your present job, suggest how the company would benefit from moving you to a different department, explain why you do not wish to leave the company.
You should write a minimum of 150 words.
Source: Cambridge 19
Task answer
Dear Sir/Madam,
It's been two years since I joined this department and i have learnt a lot over these two year of which, i am appreciate of. Over my two years say in my department, I have developed exceptional skills such as teamwork and leadership, basic use of Microsoft excel and presentational skills. Moving to a new department will enable me to build upon my acquire skills from my previous department. I will get the opportunity to learn my new team members and also take up some challenging roles that will help me become a better person. With this I will ensure that I will de diligent with my work, put in my maximum best at any given role just to ensure the longevity of the company. I will be glad if this opportunity is given to me to explore my full potential.
Yours faithfully, angela adjei
Word count:145