Writing report
academic IELTS Writing: Task 1
Overall score
7.00
7.0 of 9.0
Submitted on
Jan 10, 2025 (3 months ago)
Writing duration
0 minutes
Task description
The charts below show the main reasons for study among students of different age groups and the amount of support they received from employers. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
You should write a minimum of 150 words.
Source: Cambridge 5
Task answer
The bar charts illustrate the rationales behind students' purposes, for the sake of their careers and interests, from various ages and the percentage of support that their administration gives to the students.
Overall, while the figure for studying for the interest, which increased with age, for those who are over 49 was higher than that of under 26, the percentage of students studying under 26 ranked first for the career, which decreased with age.
The career-orinted study saw its peak at 80 percent for the students under 26, a trend that decreased gradually group by group, reaching just under 20 percent for over 49. There was a steep rise in the interest-orinted study from 10 percent of under 26 to 70 percent of over 49.
The corresponding percentage in the employer's support is the highest for under 26 with well above 60 percent. This figure experienced a steady decrease in support from the age under 26 to 30 decades, just above 30 percent. After that, this trend increased slowly to just over 40 for over-49-year-old students.
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