Writing report
academic IELTS Writing: Task 2
Overall score
6.50
6.5 of 9.0
Submitted on
Mar 02, 2025 (4 months ago)
Writing duration
0 minutes
Task description
Some university students want to learn about other subjects in addition to their main subjects. Others believe it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for a qualification. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
You should write a minimum of 150 words.
Source: Cambridge 18
Task answer
Some argue that undergraduates have dream of study about other subjects in addition to their main subjects. Others believe that is is crucial to give them more time to concentrate to studying for a qualification. This essay will discuss both perspective before presenting my view.
There are some reasons for undergraduates learn about other subjects in addition to their main subjects. First, learning other subjects can help students have a basic foundation about many fields. For example, learning maths can help them have calculating skills or logical thinking skills. In order to seeking knowledge from other subjects, underaduates can have enough knowledge about many fields, so they can solve any unexpected problems that happens in their work more easily. Second, undergraduates can have more the way road to access to successful. As a result, university students do not worry about their future and will comfortable in learning without pressure or stress.
Undergraduates should learn focus on a qualification because this can help them have a good opportunities for their jobs with excel levels. This is mainly due to they will access with professional and deep knowledge about their main subject. If students pay attention to learn and understand deep knowledge, they will have the amount of excel knowledge with many skills about this subject. For example, students have directly in work in a finance company, they must have professional fianance knowledge and skills about this field such as caculating skills or the passion of working with numbers. As a result, they will have a secure job about their passion and with a excel qualificantion they can be easily recruited by quality and good company with a high income and do not worry about their life and job.
In conclusion, although two opinions are correct, I believe undergraduates should learn a basic foundation about other subjects and focus deeply on professional knowledge of their main subject. Because they not only have a basic foundation to solve unexpected problems happens in their job but also have strong knowledge to work more productive and have more opportunities to work in a quality company. As a result, they can have a better life and a secure job with stable income.
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