Writing report
general IELTS Writing: Task 1
Overall score
6.00
6.0 of 9.0
Submitted on
Mar 16, 2025 (4 months ago)
Writing duration
0 minutes
Task description
You started in your present job two years ago. You now feel it is important for your career development to move to a different department in the same company. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter, say what you have learned in your present job, suggest how the company would benefit from moving you to a different department, explain why you do not wish to leave the company.
You should write a minimum of 150 words.
Source: Cambridge 19
Task answer
Dear Madam. I have done well here for two years and I think it's time to let me widen my career.I am not going anywhere I just want to move to different deparment to have more knowledge in this major
Firstly, I want to say thank you for all your help to me in this department. Through this present job, I am now can earn a pretty good income that help my family debt. Also it make me be more responsible for what I am doing not only for the company but also to myself. I appreciate that. I love the working environment here but you know, I would like to challenge myself what I have never done before. I want to be flexible in everything, learn or doing some new things. Therefore, I hope to be moved in another department in our company to experience about the job. This company is like my second home and I want to dedicate myself to be a part of the company and to develope it stronger. I wish I would still be here and work friendly colleague.
In conclusion, I hope to be moved to another department and dedicate for the company. Yours faithfully
Word count:200