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academic IELTS Writing: Task 1

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Jun 07, 2025 (10 months ago)

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Task description

The charts below show the number of Japanese tourists traveling abroad between 1985 and 1995 and Australia's share of the Japanese tourist market. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

You should write a minimum of 150 words.

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Task answer

The charts indicate how many people were traveling abroad from Japan over the years 1985 and 1995, and the percentage of those who chose Australia as the destination. Overall, as it is clear from the first chart, during these ten years, the total number of tourists increased, and the second chart shows that the percentage of people who have traveled to Australia increased too. but after the year 1993, it decreased. In the year 1985, the number of tourists who traveled abroad in Japan was approximately five million, but it rose in the next years until the year 1991, because in this year the number decreased. But from the year 1992, the increasing rate started again until 1995, which it reached approximately 15 million tourists, and it is the highest number through these years. As it is clear from the second chart, in the year 1985, only two percent of people were choosing Australia for their destination, but as time went by, more tourists preferred to travel to this country. In the year 1989, the percentage of people who decided to travel to Australia decreased, but after this year, it began to rise again. In the year 1993, the highest percentage of tourists chose Australia over these ten years,

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