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general IELTS Writing: Task 2

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7.00

7.0 of 9.0

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Jul 17, 2025 (9 months ago)

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0 minutes

Task description

Some people feel that entertainers (e.g. film start, pop musicians or sports starts) are paid too much money. Do you agree or disagree? Which other types of job should be highly paid? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

You should write a minimum of 150 words.

Source: Cambridge 7

Task answer

Some people believe that famous people like movie actors, musicians, or sportspeople are getting a lot of money. I agree with the tatement as these people deserve money due to several reasons. However, in my point of view, other professionals, such as doctors and soldiers should be paid equally. To begin with, a life of famous people has never been easy. Firstly, they need to travel frequently for their concerts or sports matches, which may disturb their biological clock. Ultimately, their physical and mental well-being are always compromised. Secondly, most of the time they need to live away from their family, which makes them feel lonely. For example, famous musician Arijit Singh travels internationally for his music concerts. As a result, sometimes he can be seen sick in his shows. Thus, these people deserve a large amount of money for their work. Likewise, there are other professionals, such as doctors and soldiers at the border, who should be paid equally. Doctors need to deal with live bodies. If they make even a small mistake, it may cost a loss of a life. Similarly, soldiers at the borders sacrifice their lives so that people in a country can sleep peacefully. In this perspective, they deserve a large amount of money for their salaries. For example, in the USA, soldiers and doctors are paid the highest wages compared to other working sectors. To conclude, famous people indeed earn a good amount of money for the work they do. However, other sectors are also important as they deal with lives and keeping the country safe from its enemies. Thus, they also should earn an equal amount of funds compared to musicians and sportsmen.

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