Writing report

general IELTS Writing: Task 1

Overall score

6.50

6.5 of 9.0

Submitted on

Jul 21, 2025 (9 months ago)

Writing duration

0 minutes

Task description

You started in your present job two years ago. You now feel it is important for your career development to move to a different department in the same company. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter, say what you have learned in your present job, suggest how the company would benefit from moving you to a different department, explain why you do not wish to leave the company.

You should write a minimum of 150 words.

Source: Cambridge 19

Task answer

Dear Sir/Madam, I hope this email finds you well. I am writing this letter in regard to my growth in the company. As you may be aware that I have been a consistent performer in the organization, and I believe that this is the appropriate time for me to showcase my abilities and skills that would be beneficial for both me and the company. I have strong leadership that has been proven in situations where I was the one to do all the problem-solving within our team. Additionally, I am convinced that the board members will also agree to my proposal, as I believe I have been recognized by them on many occasions. Moreover, I have no plans of leaving the firm, and I assure you that I will be a good fit for the higher position. I request you to have a core consideration while selecting candidates based on their skills. I hope to hear from you soon. Thanking You Yours Sincerely, Abdul

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