Writing report

general IELTS Writing: Task 2

Overall score

6.00

6.0 of 9.0

Submitted on

Aug 13, 2025 (8 months ago)

Writing duration

0 minutes

Task description

In some countries young peope have little leisure time and are under a lot of pressure to work hard in thier studies. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.

You should write a minimum of 150 words.

Task answer

Youngsters are not getting enough time to relax and are forced to do hard work to excel in their studies. It is a growing concern in a wide range of countries due to lenthy academic subjects and high competition in the job markets. These problems can be remedied by limiting the course modules and balancing the commercial markets. The first reason for a busy student life is studying multiple subjects in a limited duration of study. Sometimes, irrelevant subjects have been added by educational faculities just to enhance their standards. These subjects do not fulfil the course requirements. For example, a mandatory French language course for a student who is pursuing in Master's of English. This is an extra burden on the students which occupies their free time of relaxation. Secondly, the youngsters have to prepare from early ages to make a place in the job market because of the rising expectations of the employers to achieve the company targets. The most important measure is to limit the session subjects. The Education Board should revise the modules and eliminate the non-beneficiary subjects from the curriculm. Moreover, there must be a check on the job posters by the government authorities who manupulate the labour market and set higher milestones for staff members, which unable them to perform good and enjoy their free time. To exemplify, the government of Britain have already on top of controlling employer's exploitations and announced a ban on forcing the employees to perform overtime without their wish. To conclude, students are required to study more because of their lengthy courses and to meet the future job qualifications. Nevertheless, they can enjoy free time once the Education Board and the government work together to limit the study and job necessities.

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