Writing report
general IELTS Writing: Task 2
Overall score
6.00
6.0 of 9.0
Submitted on
Sep 09, 2025 (7 months ago)
Writing duration
0 minutes
Task description
Some people feel that entertainers (e.g. film start, pop musicians or sports starts) are paid too much money. Do you agree or disagree? Which other types of job should be highly paid? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write a minimum of 150 words.
Source: Cambridge 7
Task answer
It is often argued that sports starts, film start... are paid too much money, but in my opinion, I strongly believe that they deserve all that money they get paid. I will be talking about why I think they deserve to earn all that amount of money, and I what others professions they should get paid more.
One of the main reasons entertainers are perceived overpaid, is because they earn a lot of money, for example, Cristiano Ronaldo gets paid around 7 million euros. When you hear that amount of money you can't believe it and if normal that most people think that it's unfair. The reason why I believe they are not overpaid, is because they generate all that amount of money. Their job if to entertain, something that they do pretty good. If we spend hours and hours watching movies, games... that means that they are really good at their job.
In addition, everybody agrees that there are other types of jobs that should be highly paid. Personally, I think that doctors, should be one of this types of jobs. All their effort, goes to try to rescue lives. We can't live without them, it's the most important profession of all of them, but not only that, they have to work really long shifts, they have to spend all night long at the hospital without any hours of sleep. that's why we should recognize their work and paid them higher, they deserve it and they will be more motivated.
In summary, entertainers are not paid too much, they are get paid based on how much money they generate. But, it's true that there are other jobs, such us doctors, that they should have higher salaries. Not only because they deserve it, also because it's the hardest one and one of the tirest job, and they should have an incentive, to work happier.
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