Writing report

general IELTS Writing: Task 2

Overall score

7.50

7.5 of 9.0

Submitted on

Oct 05, 2025 (6 months ago)

Writing duration

1703 minutes

Task description

With the rapid advancement in technology, digital privacy concerns are growing. Should the protection of digital privacy be the sole responsibility of governments, or do individuals also need to be proactive? Share your opinions in a minimum of 250 words.

You should write a minimum of 150 words.

Task answer

In recent times, the use of social networks has increased drastically, despite having a high risk of privacy. Different new incidents according to privacy policy have raised this issue in the current world. In my perspective, everyone should be more alert about their own safety; however, local governments also needs to take proper steps to prevent this matter. Conspicuously, everyone has to be aware about their own safety. One clear reason is that in the modern era it is very easy to manipulate other people by using AI tools. To prevent all this unusual stuff, we need to be more careful while we are posting any photo on social media. For instance, anyone can use a person's social media photo to make it a vulgar photo, and then ask for remuneration or can send it to the person's family members to harass the family. In addition, we also need to be more specific, while we are opening any third party website because it can hack our profile and steal our information. Furthermore, whenever we give permission to access our bank details to a website we need to take extra precautions, so that we do not lose our money. In the same way, local governments also need to take some steps to stop these type of scammers, like local governments need to hire more ethical hackers so prevent these cases. Moreover, local governments can also limit the use of technology according to age, where young people will not get the access of all 18+ websites. They can also establish a team to monitor all these incidents, so that people can feel safer while browsing. In conclusion, it has become very essential to take proper steps about privacy concerns, not only personal awareness can solve this issue but also local government needs to take a forward step so that everyone feels safe while browsing.

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