Writing report

general IELTS Writing: Task 2

Overall score

6.50

6.5 of 9.0

Submitted on

Oct 17, 2025 (6 months ago)

Writing duration

115 minutes

Task description

With the rapid advancement in technology, digital privacy concerns are growing. Should the protection of digital privacy be the sole responsibility of governments, or do individuals also need to be proactive? Share your opinions in a minimum of 250 words.

You should write a minimum of 150 words.

Task answer

Nowadays, the distress of digital safety is increasing among people, because of the fast improvement of technology. However, the government is taking proper steps to prevent them by investing in ethical hackers; besides that, every person should also take care of their own safety before entering any personal details on any website. In my perspective, we need to work as a team to prevent ourself from any kind of fraud. Conspicuously, the government is investing a lot of money to hire either software developer or ethical hackers, so that they can invest their knowledge to protect people's information. Despite that, sometimes information get leaked out to the dark web, and most of the time some people use those data to harm others. In addition, the government is trying to add a compulsory course to our study material to teach us basic safety procedure. For instance, in Bangladesh the government added a different subject named 'Digital Technology' to our schools, so that children can learn this from the beginning of their study. Additionally, we also need to be careful before entering any personal data in any unauthorized website. We always need to check the authenticity of any server before even clicking on its link. Plus, we always need to use the verified server all the time. For example, whenever we are purchasing anything from an online store before giving our debit card or credit card details, we always need to verify the online page, so that no one can ever use our card after us. To conclude, not only the government are working or investing on to protect us from fraud people, but also we need to be more careful about our information. If we can work collaboratively as a team then we can save everyone from any sort of harm.

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