Writing report
general IELTS Writing: Task 2
Overall score
8.50
8.5 of 9.0
Submitted on
Apr 13, 2026 (2 months ago)
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0 minutes
Task description
Some people feel that entertainers (e.g. film start, pop musicians or sports starts) are paid too much money. Do you agree or disagree? Which other types of job should be highly paid? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write a minimum of 150 words.
Source: Cambridge 7
Task answer
It is often argued that entertainers such as film stars, pop musicians, and sports personalities receive excessively high salaries. While I agree that many of them are overpaid in relation to their contribution to society, I also believe that certain other professions deserve significantly higher remuneration.
There are strong reasons to support the view that many entertainers earn far more than they merit. Firstly, their income is often disproportionate to the value they add to society. For example, a famous football player or Hollywood actor can earn millions of dollars for a single performance or season, while their main role is to provide entertainment. In contrast, professions that save lives or shape the future of nations receive far less recognition and financial reward. Moreover, the enormous salaries of entertainers are largely driven by media hype, sponsorship deals, and public obsession rather than genuine societal contribution. This creates an unhealthy imbalance in how talent and effort are rewarded.
In my opinion, several other types of jobs should be highly paid due to their critical importance to society. Doctors and nurses, for instance, work tirelessly to save lives and improve public health, yet their salaries are often modest compared to celebrities. Similarly, teachers and university lecturers play a fundamental role in educating future generations and conducting valuable research; however, they are rarely compensated at a level that reflects their long-term impact. Scientists, engineers, and researchers who develop solutions to global challenges such as climate change, renewable energy, and disease prevention should also receive substantial financial rewards. These professions require years of intensive study, deep expertise, and immense responsibility, and higher pay would both attract top talent and demonstrate societal appreciation for their contributions.
To conclude, although entertainers undoubtedly bring enjoyment to millions, many are paid disproportionately high amounts. I firmly believe that essential professions such as healthcare workers, educators, and researchers should be among the highest-paid in society, as their work has far greater and more lasting value to humanity.
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